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MemberOvomorphApr-10-2013 12:14 AM
Prometheus 2 Pitch After the disappearance of Weyland's Prometheus ship and mission. Yutani Corporation makes a hostile take over of the Weyland Corp. and sends a new ship to LV 223 The Akagi Maru The ship has company scientists, government officials and military personnel. Once arrived on LV 223 They find still alive in a an emergency cryo tube "Meredith Vickers" Meredith recovers and shows the location of the Derelicts to the new team from the Akagi. She wants to go back and explains the horrors of what this place was but has no choice but to go with the Weyland-Yutani's crew to the closest Derelict A second more advanced military android named Kato, was sent with the Akagi crew. After arriving at the destroyed crashed Derelict, Kato turns on one of the ships navigation systems. The Kato finds a way to connect to the ships mainframe and by accident Kato is linked to it and receives data and learns the truth to the Space Jokeyes and Human connection. Kato starts talking in a deep voice " The Space Jockeys were an advanced biological robots system created by superior beings from an old dying civilization. Humans were an improved version of the Space Jockeys. Modern human DNA was implanted in the Space Jockey as a reproductive vessel to be activated when they spread their seed. Humans carry the codes in their DNA for the Creator beings to come back when if they ever got destroyed. The Humans were designed to destroy each other. To control over population an evil "envy gene" was implanted. The Space Jockeys wanted to destroy humans and the Creator. Kato says that the Creator beings were beleived to be destroyed in a war by the Space Jokeys. The Creator beings released their ultimate weapon the Xenomorph. The crashed Derelict space display hologram shows a flashing light in an orbit next to an apparent dead planet called LV 426. The crew of Akagi with Meredith decide to go. Once in orbit close to LV 426 the Akagi crew and Meredith finds a Derelict ship to their surprise. Lights around the Derelict ship are flashing. A small door opens as an invitation. The Akagi crew goes in. Once inside the ship and at its cockpit conteol center the crew finds David!! The Akagi crew looks worried as teenagers that made a mistake. David was dysfunctional with severe bite marks on his face. Kato tries to connect to David with no avail. David is totally disfigured but finally he turns on and with the remaining eye watches them. David asks Kato to download his memories and turn him off. Meredith asked David if another Engineer was on the ship? David says No. Meredith then asks him " Who brought you here? Davis answers Shaw. After a few seconds later Kato turns around, drops David's head and faces the crew to say "Are you willing to die to find your answers" Meredith shouts out at Kato "What are you trying to say you stupid machine! Where is Shaw? Is there another Engineer? Who piloted this ship? Kato says I did with Shaw who brought me here. Where is Shaw? Where is she??? Says Meredith. Kato says "It is in the ship" Shaw is no more! What's in the Ship??? Says Meredith. Kato says with a frozen and dead look "The Creator" The Creator was waiting for us to be reborn! To be continued.... Part II of Prometheus 2 Pitch Kato started to twitch and opened his mouth as something was happening with his programing. Kato frozed. A female who is a military specialized robotics designer and a scientist called Machiko, who rushed to it and tried to stop Kato as it fell to its back with its eyes frozen. The boarding party of 8 which included an African American biologist named James Wolf. James who was the lead scientist asked Machiko "What's wrong with him" as everyone gathered around Kato. Machiko said "I don't know. I will try a full reboot of its systems and if nothings wrong then it should take a few minutes Back in the Akagi a military technician was finishing her hot shower next to a huge laboratory. She stepped out naked from the female locker room and pulled her towel that had some sticky oily liquid on it. Kira looked at it in disgust when she turned around and opened a large closet door to pull another towel when something scratched her hand and she said "ouch". She slowly turned on the light of the large closet to see a fully grown Deacon unfolding. Kira screamed and ran naked. The Deacon was now grayish in color and its head looked like a human skull with no eyes and less pointier in its head as it was when it was born. The Deacon was very attracted to the strong smell off human flesh. In the Akagi Maru's cockpit were the other 3 remaining occupants including its Captain. Captain Eito was drinking coffee and looking at the Derilict in wonder, when it's outer door entrance started to close. "James, this is Eito!" James sayed "Go ahead" "James, the outer door of the Derelict ship is closing" James said "What" Kira was running naked through the hallways and screaming Eito, Charlie connect me to Eito!!! Eito heard the screaming over the intercoms and shouted her name back when she stopped in a four way hallway. Kira was looking scared out of her life while she stared at every all the empty hallways. "Kira!! What's going on??? Eito!! There is something here that came with us from that fkg planet!!! When she turned to face her back a slime fell on her head and when she looked up a large opened mouth with human looking teeth just snapped and bit her head off in a split second. Eito heard a dumping sound over the mike and he continued to scream and ask Kira what is it?? Where are you? No answer came. Eito asked the main computer "Charlie, where is Kira? Eito my sensors indicate that her voices came from the cross hallway 4 deck level 2" Charlie, show me that location. Eito and the other crew members saw the monitors in disbelief as blood was all over the walls and her body on the floor. All three Eito, Fumiko and Beniko grabbed high voltage taser shotguns and ran to her location. They where running frantically to her location. Once there, Eito saw with sadness Kira's decapitated body. Eito immediately pointed his weapon forward and said "Fumiko cover my Six. Where's Beni?" Fumiko said Sir he was just behind me!! Eito said Charlie put me on loud speakers "Beniko!! Answer me!! Are you ok!! No answer. Answer me God dammit!! The loud noise bothered the Deacon and it screamed back with a loud shriek!!! Which spooked Eito and Fumiko. The Deacon ran past one of the hallways. Fumiko saw it as it passed by at the end of the hallway and he said "Sir we need to get the fk out of here fast" Eito asked "What did you see? Sir it's huge" Charlie I need you to find the location of the shrieking noise by blasting loud music and put my favorite heavy metal song at full blasts all over the ship except my location NOW!!! Fumiko says " Sir that's going to push it here? Eito "Yes that's what I want" Charlie started playing Welcome to the Jungle by Guns and Roses at full blasts. The Deacon turned slowly into the Hallway facing Eito. Eito said "Fumiko my 12 now" Full electrical charge! Deacon charged but both Eito and Fumiko fired electrical wired pin cartridges and hit the Deacon in its head with a 20,000 volta. The Deacon fell on the floor trembling and moving towards them while shrieking when it's head exploded. Eito and Fumiko looked at the dead Deacon and they were relieved. Eito said "Charlie good job. Yes Sir, Is there anything else I can help you with" Yes Charlie please stop the music and get me James Wolf on the speaker please. Charlie said "Yes Sir" Eito! Yes, Charlie go ahead. Eito all coms are broken with the other 8. Back in the Derelict. James was calling for Eito with no response. Meredith said "Did Eito just say that the air lock door just closed? All the lights inside the cock pit went black. Machiko said "Everyone please turn your helmet lights" Meredith shouted at them "I didn't just survive a two year cryo tube to die in this fkg ship!! I'm leaving, who's coming with me NOW! James looked at her and said "You will not be going anywhere before I kill you first" To be continued Prometheus 2 Part III James was pointing a gun at Meredith James are you fkg crazy. I will make sure you will burn for this!!! James says "I am close to making the greatest discovery of mankind and i will not let a disgruntled little bitch get in the way with it" Someone grabbed James from behind and grabbed his gun and pointed it at James head while james faced the others. Drop your weapons!! Kato screamed at the two other military escort team members that where carrying Taser shotguns. Kato's voice was just like Daivd's. Meredith asked David is that you? David answered "Yes ma'am" Meredith asked how can that be? I was designed with a special trojan programing to take over Prometheus main program systems if necessary or in the event of imminent danger to Mr Weyland, you or the mission by the crew. David, what happened to Shaw? Meredith asked. Ma'am, Shaw was absorbed by the walls of this ship. This ship seams to be a living bio-mechanical laboratory. Humans were an experiment that at one some point some Space Jockeys and as you call them Creators disapproved and revolted. Meredith asked against who? Back at the Akagi. Finished securing all bodies in body bags in the lab biological containers. Eito said " Fumiko I have to go to that ship to find the others. Fumiko said "Are you crazy? That ship is probably full of those nasty things and if not for our ceramic floors, that thing's blood would've burned a huge whole through the ship's hull. I have to see if I can open the door and get in. I'm suiting up. Eito was at the huge door of the Derelicts ship's outer hull when he touched the door and after a few seconds it started to open. Fumiko, called Eito" Go ahead "Fumiko replied" Fumiko, the door just opened and if I don't come back in 12 hours then blow this piece of Alien junk out of sky and go back with out us" Fumiko said but Sir!!! Fumiko if I dnt come back that means we are all dead and you are next!!! You got me??? That's an order!!! Said Eito. "Yes Sir" said Fumiko Meredith, Meredith "Shaw's voice called in a thunderous sound Everyone was looking around with their flash lights when the ships cockpit lights turned on, illuminating the walls. There, in the ceiling was a scary but beautiful bio-mechanical woman forming. (From H R Gigers Necronomicon half female half Alien design) Out of the walls came this beautiful being in what appeared to have a light resemblance to Shaw's face. Her body was fuming as to an extreme temperature as she stood up over 12 feet tall. Everyone was just frozen in amazement. When the being's eyes opened wide... To be continued.... What do you think so far???
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R.j.cobb

MemberOvomorphApr-12-2013 6:56 PM
All very great Original points of interest. lets hope they dont screw up on the next film cos i think they really need to get it right and do a bit of research amongst fans/

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MemberOvomorphApr-13-2013 10:46 AM
Posted Part II and III

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MemberOvomorphApr-13-2013 7:28 PM
What do you guys think of my 3 part pitch so far

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MemberOvomorphApr-15-2013 9:00 AM
some get bitten by cobra-like water snakes, some from the face hugger in the juggernaut, the Engineer by the tribolite (big Squid), the science-tech guy transformed into a zombie. don't recall who he kills. cold-hearted Vickers burns Dr. Shaw's love interest, Capt & 2 crew die in their suicide attack on the Juggernaut. Guess the (bad) Engineer flying the Juggernaut had not died. these guys are tuff (off-beat spelling) and the ship was not that beat up upon falling back to the ground. He tries to finish off Dr. Shaw, gets tangled up & suffers the gestation process we know from the Alien series. David again gets his head ripped off, just like in Alien 2. One survivor, Dr. Shaw. Correction: the gestated alien is still there. Left behind I believe. Dr. Shaw decided to take on the home planet of the Engineers, a solo intervention. She with untrustworthy David ... and her shiny religious cross to guide her? One ship against a world or is the idea to go there for explanations? that would be like an Indian chieftain sailing to corrupt Europe (before 1492) and asking for an explanation of things to come? the Indians brought forcibly to Europe by their white exploiters were locked up and objects of wonder to be stared at. Dr. Shaw, coming from a technological backwater (the Earth), won't have a strong case, even weaker with David to "guide" her. His loyalty is his Weyland chip program, even if he thinks he is smarter than the average person. This is not a duo team going to conquer. They are divided from the get go. I wouldn't put much faith in Dr. Shaw's silver cross either. Jesus ended up calling for help from dad and got none. This cross around the neck of a scientist of 2093 is soooo American churchy. after all the misery we have had with these 2 short sticks crossing ( = catholic cross) it is an error to put it into an alien SciFi film - a distraction. and thereby, for me, Dr. Shaw is made to look like some kind(a) believer in things best forgotten.

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MemberOvomorphApr-15-2013 1:14 PM
LMAO!!!!

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MemberOvomorphApr-15-2013 1:16 PM
It's hard to fix a bad conceived movie like Prometheus I agree

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MemberOvomorphApr-16-2013 7:57 AM
Prometheus 2 Part IV James Wolf opened his mouth and said "That's impossible" Kato who is now controlled by David's programing lowered his weapon. Everyone was amazed at this alien's appearance, a bio mechanical wonder. A highly sophisticated body and movement. She was perfect. The large female mechanical being was looking at her arms and body while she smiled. James said "What's your name? And wondered what she was. Do you understand me" She looked down on James and looked back at her beautiful arms and answered in a weird language. David understood her and he answered back... James got closer to her while she observed David. "Meredith said don't James don't get so close" while she was paralyzed in fear. Machiko asked David "What did she say to you David" He answered "Her name is Ki" and she asked us if we are Annunaki and how did we get here" Ki walked away and sat on one of the Space Jokey chairs and turned around to face them. Ki was operating different controls of the Derelict's chair and closing her eyes. Meredith asked David " What language is she speaking" David answered "Ma'am I believe she was speaking in a form of ancient Sumarian" She pointed at David and he started to walk to her and then he stood still while his eyes started to roll back. Eito was calling for Fumiko or the others on his helmet microphone while walking through a large hallway but did not receive an answer. He encountered a large door that he touched and it opened to a room with a weird looking egg larger that was than him. Eito got closer and saw that it was humid and when he touched it his gloves started to burn. Eito remembered the Deacon had acid for blood. The egg started to vibrate and glow inside of it. Eito stepped back and saw something moving. Eito pointed his taser weapon and shot an electrical shot that looked like a lightning volt that went through the egg and then it opened its top. Eito believed that he killed whatever it was and walked away. The door closed behind him. He was using an acoustic sound search device to find the others. The device guiding him was searching for human vocal sounds. David turned around and said... "From Sky to Earth." Anu is the supreme deity in the Sumerian system. Ki is the goddess of the Earth. The offspring of Anu and Ki are called the Annunaki. The Annunaki are the children which Anu created on planet Ki. The Annunaki were served by the Igigi until the Igigi revolted, forcing the Annunaki to create Mankind. Sumerian paradise is described as a garden of Atrahasis where lower rank deities (the Igigi) were put to work digging a watercourse by the more senior deities (the Anunnaki). When the gods, man-like, Bore the labour, carried the load, The gods' load was to great, The toil grievous, the trouble excessive. The great Anunnaku, the Seven, Were making the Igigu undertake the toil. The Igigi then rebel against the dictatorship of Enlil, setting fire to their tools and surrounding Enlil's great house by night. On hearing that toil on the irrigation channel is the reason for the disquiet, the Annanuki council decide to create man to carry out agricultural labour. James who was a religious fanatic and biologist who believed firmly in creation started to shout NO!!! This can't be NOOO!!!! We are not slave monkeys created to dig minerals for another civilization!!! NOO!!! When James ran and grabbed a shot gun from the floor and pointed at Ki... To be continued....

R.j.cobb

MemberOvomorphApr-17-2013 7:11 PM
A zeus crew member revives shaw insistant on escaping this world and returning to earth. carnage erupts as the two xeno's who are both 11ft tall and barbed have infiltrated the underground complex and have started shredding everything living. death screams echo around the cavern as helpless crew and natives alike are put to horrific deaths

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MemberOvomorphApr-21-2013 12:56 PM
Nice I'm working on the final part V. Just let me know how you guys like the other 4 parts

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MemberOvomorphApr-29-2013 1:17 PM
Prometheus 2 Part V Wolf pointed his weapon at Ki when he got shot in the head from behind by David. Wolf landed flat on his face. Ki looked at them while some screamed as others went for their weapons and tried to shoot David. Ki pushed a button in her large chair and she started to dawn a very scary Jokey Space suit. David avoided being shot by the military technicians and ran to fight them. David grabbed one Mil Tech by his head and snapped his neck while kicking the other Mil Tech in his mouth, forcing his jaw through his skull. David stopped looking at Meredith, Machiko and the other two scientist. They all ran for their lives toward the cockpit entrance when David grabbed from behind one of the scientist and snapped his neck with ease. David dropped the scientist's body and looked down on his chest to find two electrical cartridges pins slamming against his body while 20,000 volts burned David's cyborg body to a crisp. Behind the shotgun was Eito while the other remaining crew members where screaming at him to look up and run. Ki stood up. "She was wearing the original scary albino looking Space Jokey suit from the original Alien movie" Eito reloaded his weapon and pointed at her and he shot her. Eito squeezed the electrical charge but nothing happened. Ki pulled the two cartridges pins from her chest and looked at them and then at Eito. Ki started to walk towards Eito while he turned and ran with the others as fast as they could through the Derelict's hallways. Machiko saw a small duct whole on the side of the walk way and jumped in feet first as Meredith jumped in and Eito shortly behind but as Eito was falling he was caught by Ki on his space jacket. Eito struggled to get loose from her grip and pushed his jacket button. Ki pulled Eito's jacket out of the whole and she screamed a high pitch sound while looking inside the small whole. Eito came out the whole and fell into another large hallway, on top of Meredith who was in slight pain. Ki's was walking and stood in front of David's motionless burned body and picked him up. Machiko was looking at a door which was locked and tried to open it at the end of the hallway when they heard large thumping sounds. Eito yelled "Wait you don't know where that door leads to", A few hours had passed and Fumiko was looking at the Derelict in wonder and still calling for his Captain on the radio with no avail. Fumiko was looking at his watch and wondering why the Derelict was parked next to this planetoid. Fumiko asked Charlie to scan LV 426. Charlie responded and said "Sir, the atmosphere is too thick with electrical storms and it was blocking a complete scan". Fumiko told Charlie to send a probe to the planet's surface. The Akagi' screened detected a moving body moving away from the Derelict. He enlarged the contact on his screen and saw what it looked like a human body. Fumiko asked the computer named Charlie to identify the target but Charlie responded that it appeard to be a human form. The close up screen saw a dark human form but he was unable to see who it was. He ran to the Akagi's space suit and outer door lock room and suited up as fast as he could, thinking it was a crew members body or worse possibly his friend and Captain Eito. Fumiko said to Charlie before he exited from the ship. "Charlie I need you to send a distress signal or warning signal to home base" Charlie asked Fumiko "Sir, what type of message would you like me to send" Charlie paused for a second and said "Charlie please send a numeric warning signal to stay away from this place, thank you" Charlie asked "Sir why numerical" Fumiko answered "The universal language is numbers Charlie" I will be back in a bit" Fumiko was floating in space and pushed his space jacket's back pack thrusters towards the lifeless floating body. Fumiko got closer to the body and a couple of kilometers away from the Akagi when he reached and grabbed it. It was dark black space when he lifted and saw the burned crisp face of a cyborg. Fumiko got spooked and pushed away David's body and he faced the Akagi when the Derelict sent a laser beam that cut the Akagi in half and later it blew up in pieces sending parts of it into orbit around LV 426 Fumiko thought that his only hope was to go seek the others inside the Derelict and he pushed his jet pack towards the ship. Ki was sitting in the pilot's chair dressed in a the Space Jokey suit making her final preparations for Earth and scanning the ship for the humans when she heard a weird sound. A sound of metal taps on metal getting louder. Ki looked around and stopped what she was doing and looked around but the tapping sound stopped. Ki looked back at her large tube monitor when a huge face hugger which jumped and wrapped its tentacles around her face in a split second leaving her motionless on the chair. To be continued to Final Part VI

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MemberOvomorphMay-04-2013 4:04 PM
R.COBB MEETS THE LAST ENGINEER TODAY !!! i ASK IF YOU ARE IN THE NEXT MOVIE... AND THE ANSWER WAS..................................

R.j.cobb

MemberOvomorphMay-07-2013 5:34 PM
Hi yes i like all your work. just you keep tapping that board with ideas.......... i really met the last engineer,,, got the pics and autograph

R.j.cobb

MemberOvomorphMay-07-2013 5:50 PM
Hi The Engineer said its the first he's heard of a part in prometheus two. but who knows.... strict hush ! orders from ridley or fox ? perhaps its to early to say...more like pre larval. casting is a good step past pre planning. that was asked last saturday

R.j.cobb

MemberOvomorphMay-07-2013 6:05 PM
Shaw and able crew member wilson are unable to exit the craft for a sea of desperate natives and the remainder of zeus's hapless crew. one xeno is seen swooping down on a man. decapatating him and dissapearing into the roof void with the head. absolute panic is spreading....and some where .....davids insane laughter fills the caverns backgrounds... shaw lends hand to pull the remaining panicking survivors aboard. a female native appears and is snatched ferociously by black barbed hands too large for even an engineer descendant. spraying blood into the eyes of shaw /

R.j.cobb

MemberOvomorphMay-07-2013 6:21 PM
There are only 5 zeus crew members left. shaw and others retreat to the engineer section or rather the left Horn of the Juggernaut. peering down onto the carnage in the Hanger/cavern below. they need david to pilot this craft...... and davids gone insane. there is a chance if they can break to the outside to the zeus..... they can fire up with minimum crew... but the more lifes lost to the xeno's, the little chance of escaping this damned world altogether. its a rock and a hard place states shaw with some surreal irony. what happened to your weapons ? Lost to some kind of cess pit ?/
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