Alien: Covenant

The deaconstructor

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OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 12:44 PM... The balance that nature seeks is the most terrible of judgments... "The deaconstructor” is that tool, it can be felt even appreciatively ... cold, viscous, and cruel... it seeks, without emotion the threads of life and crushes them, those oh so fragile threads... so much sadness... so much sorrow. The Masters knew this, they themselves had changed..., and those fragile long lost memories of their homeworld...so peaceful and utterly beautiful. They had been cleansed of all impurities... emotions, desires, and even compassion. They stand on parched ground of a nameless planetoid, waiting for their time... the sacrifice to life and nature... each of the nobles stand, silent and alone to themselves. Eons have passed, but for these men, no, for they are no longer men in that sense...as beings, mere vessels... that will carry forward nature's will to create a new life. A single soul is chosen, among the many present, he steps forward to meet the high elder... first he bows, and then he kisses the feet of the wise one. In both ceremony and deathly silence, the gears of nature begin to turn. A star ship, laced with technology of millions of years old... stands silently above a green planet, like a dark cloud, it blocks the sun... A small group of engineers watch in silence as that mighty ship enters orbit around a most special of worlds. The planet is indeed a garden of life, beauty, and promise; with mountains of green trees and a multitude planet life, and oceans so blue to hurt the eye to even look upon them... she is ready... the mother earth has a womb green with love and caring... waiting for the silent seeder from a far. The landing party were many, of all ages and wisdom abound. The chosen one walks with the high elder, silent, moved by this most solemn of events. The high elder faces the sacrificial engineer, this builder of life. The elder then takes his student's robe... the seeder now feels the mist from the roaring waterfalls. Handed a bowl, cold and contemptible this odd piece of pottery is... so small but so life changing. A wonderment of technology, held in the hands of the engineer, the bowl is opened and the contents begins to activate. It is time... the others glance one more time before they depart... no one must be near "the deaconstructor" when it is activated... for it does not hold pity or remorse for its actions. Thoughts of old forgotten memories arise one last time, like a story told in an instant... so warm and loving are those memories... a single tear streaks down the engineers cheek. The bowl and its contents move willingly down the engineer’s throat... seeking, knowing, and destroying all in its path... "The deaconstructor" is more than a simple mutagen; it is the catalysis of unimagined power and violence...and the ultimate form of life. …It has found it's vessel of purpose... and the engineer feels the fire throughout his body, deaconstructor spreads, and the horror of the moment is upon...him.
18 Responses to The deaconstructor

Custodian

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-04-2012 1:29 AMyeah, call that mutagen THE BLACK PHOENIX and it's a corker. Well imagined. Well rendered.
2013 sci-fi horror novels 'Custodian' and 'Tandem' available from Amazon, B&N, iTunes etc...

shambs

OvomorphMember40 XPAug-04-2012 2:23 AMawesome, a deep and detailed look at the sacrifice, thanks and I am very excited to read the next story ;)

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OvomorphMember0 XPAug-04-2012 12:53 AM@David 1, Sky, King, Freeze, and Batchpool Thank you for reading my short... your words of encouragement mean a lot to me. I am at an odd place in my life... discovering something that I never thought would be possible... may in fact become a reality and I want everyone there every step of the way... Thanks again for your support.

tankgirl

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 12:59 PMso cool patch!!!!! but dont stop .... can we have more??? ;)
\"My God, its full of stars\" David Bowman

Chris

EngineerAdmin23340 XPAug-03-2012 1:34 PMWhat happened here? Where did your topic go Patch buddy?
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**Al**

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 1:39 PMHeee.. I was in the middle of it... :) el alma del artista *suspira*
The world will spin well past our last breath, but I will always care about you

Prenihility

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 2:27 PMOh, wow... Patch. I didn't know you did poetry. I always figured you as a sexual deviant Quagmire-type-of-guy. A..anyway. Great work. Great work.

ZetaReticuli

OvomorphMember26 XPAug-03-2012 2:45 PMVery eloquent and evocative verse patch. A measure of the film's subliminal and myriad contexts. A similar poem couldn't be written about AVPR now could it? See where I'm going here?

FREEZE!

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 3:16 PMenjoyed reading this last night on the SB, glad you put it together for us Patch! Looking forward to more awesome stories from you buddy!
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OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 3:48 PM@Prenihillity "sexual deviant Quagmire-type-of-guy".... that and the darkness is where I find my energy. Thanks :-) and thank you everyone. Since I hated the screenplay so much, I have decided to rewrite the whole darn movie scene by scene as it should have been done (at least in my eyes and my heart). They will just be sitting in the media section if ever you would like a new spin on a movie that could have been a true science fiction masterpiece.

FREEZE!

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 3:59 PMcan't wait to read it all Patch, awesome!
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David 1

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 4:28 PMPaul, brother, how does it feel to let the words pour out? That single instant when you unrestrain yourself and let the words flow, is one of the greatest moments in the life of a creator, an Artist, whatever you might feel as. Great job Paul. I would use those words as a Voice-Over in the movie. m/ keep rocking brother
[b]Ask nothing from no one. Demand nothing from no one. Expect nothing from no one.[/b]

Sky

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-03-2012 5:38 PMKeep it going there patch ;)
Uncertainty is the only certainty there is, and knowing how to live with insecurity is the only security.

King

OvomorphMember3 XPAug-03-2012 6:45 PMAmazing! keep up the good work!

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Batchpool

FacehuggerMember357 XPAug-04-2012 12:01 AMEvery word well crafted, and appreciated. superp.

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OvomorphMember0 XPAug-04-2012 2:48 AM@Shambhala Thanks Shambhala. I am so glad you enjoyed it. When I read it I get a little emotional... it's a sad story of the engineers. This should have been the underlying story in the movie... making that humanizing connection... and then rip it apart right in front of them...

Custodian

OvomorphMember0 XPAug-04-2012 4:01 AMpatch, you're right HUMANIZING CONNECTION would have been great. Unfortunately (and I understand why you're revisiting the film) is the only character with any 'human connection' was the android David8 -- the rest of 'em were just Corporate Drones, PROFIT-driven dog-slaverers, SLAVES. Oh, and the God-stalking Dr Shaw.
2013 sci-fi horror novels 'Custodian' and 'Tandem' available from Amazon, B&N, iTunes etc...

Lone

PraetorianMember2674 XPAug-05-2012 9:22 AMpatch....awesome....just awesome! We will all be with you, every step of the way.

THE LONE GUNWOMAN

"Let The Cosmic Incubation Begin" ~ H.R. Giger

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