Scroll down a bit on the landing page, just added your work to the list. :)
*Man's giant leap was just a stumble in the dark.*
Godzilla: King of the Monsters this is brilliant!!! Such tranquillity to your writing, offset by the ominous anticipation of what is to come. Especially with the calm before the storm metaphor you have incorporated so fluidly into your story.
Johnson's calm demeanour is almost David-like in his gracefulness.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Upvoted.
Not usually a fan of fan-fiction...but yours is not as pretentious as some, and I find it to be intriguing! Nice work, Godzilla!
I love it! I actually felt like I was suffocating while reading this!
(0_o I think I kept inadvertently holding my breath while he while he was looking for his helmet, lol!)
I have a feeling that his loneliness is going to be the least of his problems very soon! Eager to read the next part!
(You should put a link to part 2 on here, so people can easily find it after reading part 1! :D )
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